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Key To Your Heart Had Spares by VisualPoetress Key To Your Heart Had Spares by VisualPoetress
About: How you thought you were the only one who held the key to his heart. (Note: This is from the past, when I discovered that someone I thought I loved had, was seeing someone else on the side and maybe more).
Poem by: VisualPoetress

Deviant Stock Artist: CB Stock
Deviation Entitled: Locked Heart Located Here: [link]
Her Gallery: [link]

Song Inspiration:

"Womanizer" by Britney Spears
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:iconmiarath:
Miarath Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
Very well-written, Michelle. It feels so intense, with all those keys the imagery of locks locked and all. :)
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2010   Digital Artist
It is from the past when a boyfriend was messing around behind my back.
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:iconmiarath:
Miarath Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
I see. I hope you're doing better now. :huggle: :heart:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010   Digital Artist
Yep Rich made it all better ;)
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:iconmiarath:
Miarath Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2010
That's good to hear. :huggle:
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:iconpola-444:
Pola-444 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
:love: I absolutely adore the idea!!! Well done.
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010   Digital Artist
Thank you so much :hug:
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:iconpola-444:
Pola-444 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2010
you're very welcome
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:icon33m:
33M Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
awesome work

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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010   Digital Artist
Thanks babe :)
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:iconsilentfuneral:
silentfuneral Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010   Digital Artist
sooo true :worship:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010   Digital Artist
Yep
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:iconsilentfuneral:
silentfuneral Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010   Digital Artist
yeppers :p
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:icontouchn2btouched:
touchn2btouched Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008
sweet words and imagine!
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2008   Digital Artist
Thank you so much :hug:
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:iconfairyfreind101:
fairyfreind101 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008
wonderful, as usual =P :hug:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008   Digital Artist
Thank you dear :hug:
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:iconfairyfreind101:
fairyfreind101 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2008
your welcome :hug:
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:iconmode-de-vie:
mode-de-vie Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008  Student Writer
I love the concluding line, about how you're changing the locks to your heart. If only it were that easy. :heart: Good work.
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2008   Digital Artist
Yep I wish it was that easy too :hug:
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:iconlovelife7:
lovelife7 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008
I weep... :cries:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2008   Digital Artist
I did too when it happened to me :tears:
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:icon1001g:
1001G Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008
loved the way this all rhymed.......fun
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008   Digital Artist
Thank you Edie :) have a good weekend coming up :)
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:icon1001g:
1001G Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008
ty michelle but i doubt it dear
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2008   Digital Artist
How is she? You and the family are in my prayers :)
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:iconthesekrimzonflames:
TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
I LOVE the last line. :)
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008   Digital Artist
I am glad you do :)
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:iconbigsharn:
bigsharn Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
I've been there before... it's not a good thing

:hug:

Amazing writing as well, can't help but shed a tear reading it
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008   Digital Artist
Me too :hug: Thank you :)
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
oh u are so good with words!
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008   Digital Artist
thank God rich has the only key to mine and vice versa ;)
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
woohooo so u love birds getting closer to seeing each other now?
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008   Digital Artist
Yes my friend is coming over to see how many people it will take to move the rest of my stuff in storage.
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
today?
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008   Digital Artist
He is coming over on Wednesday to help see how many people it will take to move, he will get the people and he will drive me to where I can rent a car.
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
but today is Friday!!! and the 4th of November has gone!!
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008   Digital Artist
Wednesday coming up .... I will try to get him over sooner, but he is going fishing and he has to be in court for his divorce. But he has a truck and will help me move, he is one of my church friends. Nice older guy.
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008  Professional Writer
Very well written sweetie... :w00t:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008   Digital Artist
Thanks hun .. some women and men are such pigs when it comes to treating their loved one right.
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008  Professional Writer
I agree whole heartedly... :hug:
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:iconthy-sun-himeko:
thy-sun-himeko Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
Great poem like always! ^_^
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008   Digital Artist
Thanks dear :hug:
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:iconfireopal14:
FireOpal14 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
Very well done Michelle:iconhuggleplz:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008   Digital Artist
Thank you Rhonda :hug:
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:iconfireopal14:
FireOpal14 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008
It was a great title too, Michelle, I never really thought about it like that before :clap: :iconhuggleplz:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2008   Digital Artist
I heard it on a comedy show joke about how he had her heart but she had many spares... I went OOOOH what a great poem title and theme :)
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:iconthedauphine:
TheDauphine Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
Amazing poem dear :hug:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008   Digital Artist
Thanks hun :)
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:iconthedauphine:
TheDauphine Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2008
You're welcome dear :aww:
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