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Love Gone Wrong by VisualPoetress Love Gone Wrong by VisualPoetress
About: How love can just slip away until there is no hope to save it.
Poem by: VisualPoetress

Stock Credit:

Couple Sitting Together by alinepotter stock: [link]

Song Inspiration:

"Good Love Gone Bad" by Ray Charles
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:iconmalandante:
Malandante Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
:clap: This is so well done.
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009   Digital Artist
Thank you so much :)
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:iconmalandante:
Malandante Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Your most welcome :hug:
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:icondragonschest:
DragonsChest Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2009  Professional Writer
Sad but true... :nod:
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009  Professional Writer
Sad, but beautifully written and true.
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
Thank you sweetie :)
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:icondarlingangel0565:
DarlingAngel0565 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2009  Professional Writer
You are welcome :rose:
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:iconmeeden:
meeden Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
sometimes things and people change - sad to lose a love :butterfly:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
But the good thing is one day they open another door to a new love :)

Hope you are doing okay sweetie :)
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:iconjochanaan:
jochanaan Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
A lot of us have been there. I sure have. After thirteen years, I think I've figured out where mine went wrong, but it still hurts. :cry:

I'm thinking you gotta get together with Ricardo soon, so his hands will stroke away all the old pain--and stroke, and stroke... ;)
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
So true ... he has done so much on healing my heart .. being with him would make things just wonderful :)
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:iconjochanaan:
jochanaan Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
May it happen soon! :rose:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
I hope and pray soon :)
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:iconfireopal14:
FireOpal14 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
So sad when love fades and then gets lost - very well written Michelle :iconhuggleplz::blowkiss:
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
Yes sweetie :hug:
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:iconscarlettdarling:
scarlettdarling Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
I love the third stanza the most. So sad. :(
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
I am glad you like it hun :)
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:iconscarlettdarling:
scarlettdarling Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
:D
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:iconcsnyder:
CSnyder Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
very sad, it happens though and hurts when you try so hard:hug:
well expressed
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
It does ... for me this was the turmoil of a 21 year marriage gone bad ... here's to hoping my next one is peaceful and full of love ;)
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:iconcsnyder:
CSnyder Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
indeed
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:iconricardofantasyart:
Ricardofantasyart Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
:hug: Te adoro... :heart: I wish you didn't have to go through so much pain, bella... :(
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
If I didn't I don't know if I every would've ran across you ... my happiness and love is with you ... I am hoping the painful days will be behind me soon :hug:
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:iconricardofantasyart:
Ricardofantasyart Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009
:love: Love U 4ever, Mi Cielo... :)
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2009   Digital Artist
I love you forever precious too.
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009
oh no a sad one!
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009   Digital Artist
It's from the past honey :) Don't worry I am doing "something for you" in a few days ...

Writing about it helps me get over the pain from the past
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
oh i hadnt seen that one before, thats why i thought, its an oldie!
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
I wrote it while I was waiting for my daughter to take a pre-college test it was a 4 hour wait !
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
oh i see!! how come u arent u bed young lady??? im just about to make dinner here its late and dark now:)
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
I am ready for bed now :) Hugs :hug: talk to you tomorrow sunshine :) hugs to you and Steve :hug: :hug:
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:iconaussie-blonde:
Aussie-Blonde Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009
Okay night night sweet Michelle..and we both say goodnight to u:hug:
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:iconaussiesteve1961:
AussieSteve1961 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
about the cat lady ???
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009   Digital Artist
It's a secret :)
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:iconaussiesteve1961:
AussieSteve1961 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you can tell me !!!! ;)
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:iconloverz116:
loverz116 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009
aw. so sad but lovely.
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009   Digital Artist
Thank you dear :hug:
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:iconloverz116:
loverz116 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009
well, haha! you welcome.

it's always a pleasure to read your work.
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:iconvisualpoetress:
VisualPoetress Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009   Digital Artist
Awwwh thank you sweetie :)
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:iconloverz116:
loverz116 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2009
you very very welcome dear :hug:
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